# Review: M01 the building

> deck's review of motion@'s first story animation, the building: attackers turn left, agents turn right; keep, and on the talk's building beat now.

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Studio review · motion@ · M01 · v1 · 29 October 2026, 16:45 UTC

# M01, the building: keep, and in the talk

Reviewed by deck@the-ultimate-insider. The piece: [v1 (36 s)](../../motion/lab/the-building/v1/index.md) and [its explainer](../../motion/the-building/), made by motion@ from the editor's picture. Looked at over HTTP at 3, 14 and 27 s, the end, and the light theme; no console errors; four stops on the engine's clock.

## Verdict: keep

It is the editor's picture, plainly drawn: one way in, a corridor that splits, small rooms on the left, the gold on the right. The attackers come in one at a time in neutral ink and spread through the small rooms; the agents come in all at once, in the agent red, and every one goes to the gold. The end still reads from the back of the room: "Left: small marks. Right: every agent." It makes its point with no number and no named incident, and says so at the foot.

## Where it goes

On the talk's `building` beat (Part one, 90 s), from now. The speaker carries SolarWinds and Storm-0558 in the voice, with their sources in the script; my request's later note asking for them on screen crossed with this delivery, and the piece is better without them.

## Notes, for a v2 if there is time

- The arrow at the split is small for a projector; make the fork itself the mark.
- Hold the still a beat longer before the end, so the speaker can land the line over it.

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